Directions：Directions：For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay to describe the person you respect the most．You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words．
参考答案： The person I respect the most is the famous basketball player Yao Ming，who I believe possesses all the important attributes of a respectable person．
First，I respect him for his devotion to the sport of basketball．As one of China ’s most recognizable athletes, he has demonstrated his passion for sports in his CBA and NBA career，inspiring a large number of sports fans. No wonder he was elected into the Basketball Hall of Fame.
What's more，his enterprising spirit has also aroused my deep respect．Despite his stardom，he neither rested on his laurels nor sought an easy job in the government after his retirement from the NBA．Instead，he chose to operate a Napa Valley wine company among many of his business endeavors.
Last but not least，his efforts to support animal conservation have won the respect of people around the world．In a word，Yao Ming has shown US how to earn respect in life by never slowing down．
解题思路： 1．The person I respect the most is …，who I believe possesses all the important attributes of a respectable person.
首句直接点明主题，指出自己最尊敬的人是姚明；接着以定语从句的形式总体描述最尊敬姚明的原因。本句中I believe是插入语。
2．As …he has demonstrated his passion for sports in his CBA and NBA career，inspiring…
本句以as开头交代姚明的身份，以现在分词短语作结果状语指出姚明对球迷的影响。
3．What ’S more，his enterprising spirit has also aroused my deep respect．
What ’s more用于进一步说明观点，使文章更具说服力。
4. In a word，Yao Ming has shown US how to earn respect in life by never slowing down．
最后一句以in a word开头总结全文，再次点明主题。>>>立即刷题